Hi Bloggers:
Holidays,
holidays, It is the only thing. I need rest, because has been a semester of
many many jobs, in the home, in the university and the high school, where I
fulfill my professional practice, also I have a son I would like to share more
time. That's why I enjoy in my house, getting up a little later, I watch many
many movies and TV shows with my son and boyfriend.
If I could
fly I'd go north of our country, because I hate the cold, and that those places
will be more temperate, an eternal spring for example!!!
I love to
travel with my little family, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery,
walking along the edge of the beach (although I think at this time are closed).
My ideal
holiday would be in France, ideally a month for to know all neighboring
countries, it would be very exciting, not only for me, for my son and boyfriend
too, would be a beautiful memory, I would like in these months (July, August)
and will not cold and the weather will be wonderful also think the winter is
colder than France here in Santiago.
I see you !!!!

Good job, Monica.
ResponderEliminarRemember including subjects in your sentences:and never say for to. You say to know!
My ideal holiday would be in France, ideally a month for to know all neighboring countries, it would be very exciting, not only for me, for my son and boyfriend too, IT would be a beautiful memory, I would like TO GO in these months (July, August) and SKIP THE COLD ....
Last, be careful with sentence formulation because what you write is not clear sometimes.
For example: "...and the weather will be wonderful also think the winter is colder than France here in Santiago"
Task 3
lexis 2
Gram 1.5.= 6.5 pts = 5.0